AQA A-Level English Literature A Paper 2: Texts in shared contexts (2A), June 2025: Question 2

25 marks · Hard difficulty · Extended Response

Examine the significance of fate and chance in Up the Line to Death, writing about at least two poems in your answer.

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02 Examine the significance of fate and chance in Up the Line to Death.

You must write about at least two poems in your answer.

[25 marks]

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Show the mark scheme Mark scheme for Question 02 concerning Up the Line to Death edited by Brian Gardner. It outlines suggested content across AO1 to AO5, discussing ideas of fate and chance in trench warfare, spiritual obligations, chaos versus order, context, and poetic form.

Question 02

Up the Line to Death – ed. Brian Gardner

Examine the significance of fate and chance in Up the Line to Death.

You must write about at least two poems in your answer.

[25 marks]

Possible content:

Please refer to pages 4 to 7.

AO5 Explore literary texts informed by different interpretations

Students might consider:

• both ‘fate’ and ‘chance’ equally or focus on one

• poems that focus on the helpless nature of trench warfare where death is a chance event unrelated

to personal choices or actions. For example, Nichol’s ‘Noon’ and Gibson’s ‘Breakfast’

• poems that explore fate in broader, more spiritual terms as a personal understanding of mortality;

for example, Seeger’s ‘Rendezvous’

• poems that explore fate in more ambiguous ways; such as Marriott-Watson’s ‘Kismet’ and

Thomas’s ‘No One Cares Less Than I’

• poems that focus on the broader aspects of fate as a moral obligation to fight for those who have

already died; for example, poems such as ‘In Flanders Fields’

• early war poems that present fate as part of a moral, patriotic imperative; for example, ‘Happy is

England Now’

• poems that focus on the absurd chaos of war where there is no overarching order, for example,

Graves’ ‘Dead Cow Farm’

• the keywords ‘fate’ and ‘chance’

• etc.

AO4 Explore connections across literary texts

Focus might be on:

• typical representations of fate and chance in the literature of WW1 and its aftermath

• the presentation of fate and chance as part of wider attitudes towards war

• etc.

AO3 Demonstrate understanding of the significance and influence of the contexts in which

literary texts are written and received

Focus might be on:

• how differing responses to fate and chance reflect changing attitudes to the war

• how cultural attitudes and values relating to fate and chance differ over time

• the differing literary approaches to the presentation of fate and chance

• etc.

AO2 Analyse ways in which meanings are shaped in literary texts

Focus might be on:

• aspects of poetic form and genre

• aspects of structure, eg use of stanzas

• aspects of language, eg rhyme, rhythm, imagery

• the organisation of the anthology

• etc.

AO1 Articulate informed, personal and creative responses to literary texts, using associated

concepts and terminology, and coherent, accurate written expression

• quality of argument

• organisation of ideas

• use of appropriate concepts and terminology

• technical accuracy.

Accept any valid interpretations, any valid comments on contexts and any valid discussion of

authorial methods.

How to answer it

Significance of Fate and Chance in Up the Line to Death

Assessment Focus

What this question tests (AQA A-Level Paper 2: WW1 and Its Aftermath)

This comparative poetry question tests your ability to sustain a conceptual argument across at least two poems from Brian Gardner's anthology, evaluating how combatants and observers conceived the forces governing survival and mortality.

AO1 (28%): Coherent thesis, rigorous critical register, logical debate, accurate textual referencing.
AO2 (24%): Close analysis of poetic form, metre, caesura, stanzaic progression, and imagery.
AO3 (24%): Historical & ideological context (fatalism, Christian stoicism, modern mechanistic warfare).
AO4 & AO5 (24%): Cross-textual connections & multi-faceted interpretations (fate vs. chance).
Question 02 • 25 Marks

Comparative Essay: Fate vs. Chance

"Examine the significance of fate and chance in Up the Line to Death. You must write about at least two poems in your answer."

Mark Breakdown: 25 marks total across all five Assessment Objectives (AO1, AO2, AO3, AO4, AO5). Marked holistically using the AQA 5-Band Mark Scheme. Band 5 (21–25 marks) requires a perceptive, assured, and sophisticated exploration of authorial methods and central concepts.

💡 Key Knowledge: Conceptualising Fate vs. Chance

  • Fate (Predetermination / Teleology): Implies an overarching cosmic, spiritual, or patriotic design. Early war poetry often framed death as an honourable, destined sacrifice ( Seeger , Brooke ).
  • Chance (Arbitrary / Absurd): Reflects modern industrialised warfare (artillery shrapnel, random snipers) where survival is disconnected from moral worth or individual agency ( Gibson , Graves ).
  • Anthology Trajectory: Brian Gardner structures Up the Line to Death chronologically into distinct thematic sections—charting a shift from romantic fatalism to disillusioned horror at sheer random destruction.
  • Ambiguity: Figures like Edward Thomas treat premonition with philosophical hesitation rather than grand mythological certainty.

🧠 Exam Technique: Band 5 Comparative Strategy

  • Define and Distinguish: In your introduction, explicitly distinguish between fate (destined, teleological, purposeful) and chance (aleatory, mechanised, absurd).
  • Comparative Synthesis: Avoid writing two isolated mini-essays. Pair poems within paragraphs through conceptual linking words ( Whereas Seeger sanctifies... Gibson reduces... ).
  • Integrate AO2 into Meaning: Never isolate rhyme scheme or metre without linking it to the question: e.g., rigid rhyming couplets mimic predetermined destiny, while fragmented metre reflects sudden, chaotic chance.
  • Anthology Organisation: Reference Gardner’s editorial sequence (e.g., shifts between early patriotic sections and the grim realism of later sections) to score high in AO2 & AO4.

✅ Model Analytical Framework & Strong Poem Pairings

Pairing Option 1: Romantic Fate vs. Brutal Chance

Alan Seeger – 'I Have a Rendezvous with Death' vs. Wilfrid Gibson – 'Breakfast'

  • Seeger: Frames death as an elevated, romantic "rendezvous" and solemn destiny. Use of iambic cadence and personification of Death creates an inevitable, noble rendezvous.
  • Gibson: Shatters this illusion with domestic bathos. A comrade is killed instantly while eating bread and butter; death is an indifferent, sudden stroke of pure chance.
Pairing Option 2: Absurd Chaos vs. Melancholic Resignation

Robert Graves – 'Dead Cow Farm' vs. Edward Thomas – 'No One Cares Less Than I'

  • Graves: Reconfigures trench landscape into primordial chaos where bombs fall without logic, completely subverting biblical or providential order.
  • Thomas: Adopts understated, stoic fatalism towards his impending end, refusing jingoistic heroics while acknowledging his inescapable destiny.

❌ Common Errors (Where Marks Are Lost)

  • Treating 'Fate' and 'Chance' as Synonyms: The mark scheme specifically highlights differentiating the two terms. Conflating them destroys nuanced AO5 debate.
  • Feature Spotting without Purpose: Identifying alliteration or enjambment without explaining how it reinforces randomness or inevitability.
  • Biographical Narrative Drift: Spending paragraphs detailing the author's military regiment or death date instead of focusing on poetic form and language.
  • Imbalanced Comparison: Writing 80% on one familiar poem and 20% on a second poem added as an afterthought.

📐 Top-Level Distinction: What Separates Band 4 and Band 5

  • Band 4 (16–20 marks): Competent and coherent. Compares two poems clearly, explains how soldiers felt helpless, and points out metaphors accurately.
  • Band 5 (21–25 marks): Conceptual and perceptive. Argues that "fate" was frequently used early in the war as an ideological coping mechanism to grant cosmic meaning to sacrifice, but was dismantled by industrialised warfare, which rendered survival a matter of cold, mathematical probability (chance).
  • Structural Integration: Directly engages with Brian Gardner’s role as anthologist, noticing how the sequencing of poems dramatises this philosophical collapse.

Topics

WW1 and its aftermath · Up the Line to Death

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