AQA A-Level English Literature A Paper 2: Texts in shared contexts (2A), June 2025: Question 9
25 marks · Hard difficulty · Extended Response
In the light of the view that 'Osborne can never stop being the teacher', examine the presentation of Osborne in Journey's End.
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09 ‘Osborne can never stop being the teacher.’
In the light of this view, examine the presentation of Osborne in Journey’s End.
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Question 09
Journey’s End – R C Sherriff
‘Osborne can never stop being the teacher.’
In the light of this view, examine the presentation of Osborne in Journey’s End.
[25 marks]
Possible content:
Please refer to pages 4 to 7.
AO5 Explore literary texts informed by different interpretations
Students might consider:
• different interpretations of the role of ‘the teacher’; the differing roles associated with teaching such
as mentorship, leadership, pastoral support and discipline, etc
• Osborne’s position in the group is an extension of his past role as teacher; he is the protective
‘uncle’ who cares for Stanhope and guides Raleigh when he arrives
• how he establishes the debate about Stanhope’s worth as a leader when speaking to Hardy at the
start of the play
• how Osborne represents the key qualities of an older officer through his loyalty, care and
diplomacy
• he is a pivotal character; the audience often learns about other characters through his observations
and interactions
• his reflective character allows for the presentation of the strangeness of war; for example, his
observation to Raleigh that there is something ‘romantic’ about the front line
• the impact of his death on the group of officers
• the significance of his role as an older officer who is seen as a supportive ‘Uncle’ figure
• the significance of public-school education
• alternative views that Osborne is defined by other roles; eg as a professional soldier
• the possible impact of particular production(s) on the interpretation of the question
• etc.
AO4 Explore connections across literary texts
Focus might be on:
• the differing ways that WW1 Literature focuses on the roles and duties of officers
• relationships between officers on the front line
• the presentation of older officers
• friendships between older and younger men
• etc.
AO3 Demonstrate understanding of the significance and influence of the contexts in which
literary texts are written and received
Focus might be on:
• the changing attitudes to the role of a teacher over time and across the class divide; for example
the public school perception of leadership and loyalty engendered by teachers might be different to
the experience of teachers shared by Trotter and Mason
• the experience of the front-line officer in WW1 29
• the changing views on the roles, attitudes, and values of front-line officers
• the changing views on authority and duty
• the significance of male perspectives in a play written by a man for an all male cast
• etc.
AO2 Analyse ways in which meanings are shaped in literary texts
Focus might be on:
• the use of dialogue to convey the interactions between officers on the front line
• the importance of props such as Osborne’s bed and the personal effects that Osborne leaves with
Stanhope before the trench raid
• the shared language of school and sport
• Osborne’s repeated reference to Alice in Wonderland and the part it plays in the presentation of
war
• the privileging of Osborne’s perspective within in the play; for example, his views on Stanhope
when arguing with Hardy and his talk with Raleigh when he arrives
• his presence in climactic scenes such as Act 2 Scene 2 when he reads Raleigh’s letter out loud
• etc.
AO1 Articulate informed, personal and creative responses to literary texts, using associated
concepts and terminology, and coherent, accurate written expression
• quality of argument
• organisation of ideas
• use of appropriate concepts and terminology
• technical accuracy.
Accept any valid interpretations, any valid comments on contexts and any valid discussion of
authorial methods.
How to answer it
Journey’s End: The Presentation of Osborne as ‘The Teacher’
What this question tests
This essay question evaluates your ability to construct a balanced, text-grounded argument responding to a critical assertion about characterisation, dramatic function, and context in R.C. Sherriff's Journey's End [25 marks].
Question Unpacking & Thesis Construction
Statement: ‘Osborne can never stop being the teacher.’
To achieve Band 5 (top marks), you must not simply list examples of Osborne being nice or fatherly. You must debate the scope and purpose of his teacher-like persona: Is it an instinctual pastoral duty, a public-school ideological reflex, or a vital psychological shield against trench neurosis?
💡 Key Arguments FOR the Statement
- Pastoral Guidance & Mediation: Acts as the calming mentor to the younger Raleigh and the emotionally fragile Stanhope; defuses conflict with Hardy in Act 1.
- Public-School Archetype: Embodies the Edwardian master—modest about athletic pedigree (playing rugby for England), reading classics, maintaining decorum.
- Didactic Nursery Escapism: Uses Alice in Wonderland not merely for leisure, but as an instructional, rational lens to process the absurd nonsense of modern war.
💡 Key Arguments COUNTERING the Statement
- Professional Military Subaltern: He is second-in-command; he understands tactical discipline, obeys suicidal orders without rebellion, and commands men.
- A Coping Mechanism (A Mask): His calm, teacher-like demeanor is a conscious performance to preserve the dugout's fragile sanity, concealing profound dread.
- Vulnerable Civilian at Heart: In private moments before the raid, he strips away the pedagogical façade—leaving behind his ring and watch, exposing raw human grief.
Authorial Methods & Dramatic Presentation (AO2 & AO3)
How Sherriff crafts Osborne on stage
🧠 Dramatic Techniques & Stagecraft (AO2)
- Stage Business & Props: Osborne’s pipe, his bed where he puts a drunken Stanhope to sleep, and his reading of Lewis Carroll. Notice the stage directions when he lays out his personal effects before the raid: cold physical reality eclipses didactic reassurance.
- Dialogue & Register: Osborne speaks with gentle diplomacy and measured cadences. He translates Stanhope’s trauma for Raleigh ( "You must remember he’s had three years here..." ), actively teaching empathy.
- Structural Foil & Catalyst: He sits midway between Raleigh’s adolescent naivety and Stanhope’s bitter breakdown. Structurally, his death in Act 3 triggers the absolute unraveling of the officers' mess.
🏛️ Historical & Literary Context (AO3 & AO4)
- The Public School Ethos: WW1 junior officers were drawn heavily from grammar and public schools. The master-pupil hierarchy transitioned straight into trench paternalism (the "gentleman amateur").
- The "Old Man" of the Trenches: At 45, Osborne is nicknamed "Uncle". In the context of the Western Front, where the life expectancy of subalterns was weeks, his age provides substitute family security.
- Class Contrast: Notice how Osborne interacts with Trotter and Mason. The teacher's pastoral warmth is cross-class, though his shared cultural literacy with Stanhope highlights Edwardian class distinctions.
📐 Band 5 Essay Blueprint (Step-by-Step)
A foolproof 4-step structure to sustain a focused critical debate
1. Introduction: Deconstruct the Prompt & State Thesis
Define what "the teacher" signifies (pedagogy, pastoral care, stoic duty). Argue that while Osborne instinctively adopts the public-school master persona to anchor the dugout's domestic order, Sherriff presents this not as a static profession, but as an active emotional survival strategy that is ultimately crushed by mechanized warfare.
2. Paragraph 1: Pastoral Mentorship & The Dugout "Schoolhouse"
Focus on Osborne’s nurturing of Raleigh and fierce defense of Stanhope against Hardy's jibes. Use close analysis of his diplomatic, instructional dialogue.
3. Paragraph 2: The "Schoolmaster's Shield" (Literary Escapism)
Examine the motif of Alice in Wonderland and his past athletic glory (playing rugby for England). Show how he uses Edwardian school virtues (modesty, stoicism, nonsense literature) to rationalise the front line.
4. Paragraph 3: Beyond the Teacher—The Soldier & The Sacrificial Victim
Examine Act 3 Scene 1 (the German trench raid). Detail the shedding of his teacher persona—handing over his wedding ring, watch, and letters. Contrast his pedagogical warmth with the mechanical, futile orders of the High Command (the Colonel).
5. Conclusion: Synthesis & Tragic Trajectory
Re-evaluate the prompt: Osborne dies not because he fails as a soldier, but because the humanist, protective values of a civilian schoolteacher have no place or power in industrial slaughter.
Band 5 Exemplar Paragraph & Examiner Commentary
Close analysis of Osborne's pastoral dialogue and literary motifs
✅ Model Analytical Extract
Sherriff presents Osborne’s pedagogical instinct not merely as a habit of civilian employment, but as a deliberate emotional bulwark against the claustrophobic dread of the dugout. When Raleigh marvels at the bizarre stillness of the trenches, Osborne recites nonsense verse from Alice in Wonderland: "The time has come... To talk of many things: Of shoes—and ships—and sealing-wax—Of cabbages—and kings" . Here, Osborne assumes the role of schoolmaster guiding a novice pupil through incomprehensible material. By framing trench life through Carroll’s surrealist verse, Osborne teaches Raleigh to accept military absurdity without collapsing into madness. However, Sherriff subtly reveals the tragic fragility of this pose; teaching requires an orderly, rational moral universe—an ideal annihilated by the arbitrary slaughter of the impending trench raid. Thus, while Osborne plays the teacher to preserve Stanhope and Raleigh’s sanity, his pedantic calm operates as a psychological mask, concealing his acute awareness of their collective doom.
❌ Common Errors & How Students Lose Marks
- Pure Storytelling: Retelling the plot of the raid or listing conversations without dissecting linguistic and dramatic choices.
- Treating the Quote Literally: Assuming the prompt only means "he used to work at a school", missing the wider metaphor of mentorship, pastoral duty, and authority.
- Ignoring Form: Forgetting that Journey’s End is a play; failing to mention stage directions, pauses, silences, or props (e.g., watch, letters, pipe).
🧠 Examiner's Insight: What Distinguishes Top Responses?
- Interrogating "Never Stop": Top students explicitly challenge the adverb "never" —exploring how his death strips the teacher identity away and leaves an unbearable void in the dugout.
- Nuanced AO3: Seamlessly integrating the Edwardian public school "cult of athleticism" and officer-man relations without dumping biographical history.
- Focus on Tone: Noting Sherriff’s naturalistic, understated dialogue (understatement was the hallmark of public-school masculinity during the era).
Topics
WW1 and its aftermath · Journey’s End
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