AQA A-Level English Literature A Paper 1: Love through the ages, June 2025: Question 3

25 marks · Hard difficulty · Extended Response

Discuss how Shakespeare presents relationships between men and women in the provided extract and elsewhere in Measure for Measure, responding to the view that trust between men and women is completely broken.

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Question 03 on Measure for Measure by William Shakespeare. The prompt states: ''In Measure for Measure, the trust between men and women is completely broken.' In the light of this view, discuss how Shakespeare presents relationships between men and women in this extract and elsewhere in the play.' followed by [25 marks]. An extract containing dialogue from Act 4, Scene 4 (featuring Escalus and Angelo, including Angelo's soliloquy) and Act 4, Scene 6 (featuring Isabella, Mariana, and Friar Peter) is provided.
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03 Measure for Measure – William Shakespeare

‘In Measure for Measure, the trust between men and women is completely broken.’

In the light of this view, discuss how Shakespeare presents relationships between men

and women in this extract and elsewhere in the play.

[25 marks]

IV.4 Enter Angelo and Escalus

ESCALUS Every letter he hath writ hath disvouched other.

ANGELO In most uneven and distracted manner. His

actions show much like to madness. Pray heaven his

wisdom be not tainted. And why meet him at the gates,

and reliver our authorities there?

ESCALUS I guess not.

ANGELO And why should we proclaim it in an hour before

his entering, that if any crave redress of injustice, they

should exhibit their petitions in the street?

ESCALUS He shows his reason for that – to have a dispatch

of complaints, and to deliver us from devices hereafter,

which shall then have no power to stand against us.

ANGELO

Well, I beseech you let it be proclaimed.

Betimes i’th’morn I’ll call you at your house.

Give notice to such men of sort and suit

As are to meet him.

ESCALUS I shall, sir. Fare you well.

ANGELO

Good night. Exit Escalus

This deed unshapes me quite, makes me unpregnant

And dull to all proceedings. A deflowered maid,

And by an eminent body that enforced

The law against it! But that her tender shame

Will not proclaim against her maiden loss,

How might she tongue me? Yet reason dares her no,

For my authority bears so credent bulk

That no particular scandal once can touch

But it confounds the breather. He should have lived,

Save that his riotous youth with dangerous sense

Might in the times to come have ta’en revenge,

By so receiving a dishonoured life

With ransom of such shame. Would yet he had lived.

Alack, when once our grace we have forgot,

Nothing goes right. We would, and we would not.

Exit

IV.6 Enter Isabella and Mariana

ISABELLA

To speak so indirectly I am loath.

I would say the truth, but to accuse him so,

That is your part. Yet I am advised to do it,7

He says, to veil full purpose.

MARIANA Be ruled by him.

ISABELLA

Besides, he tells me that if peradventure

He speak against me on the adverse side,

I should not think it strange, for ’tis a physic

That’s bitter to sweet end.

MARIANA

I would Friar Peter –

Enter Friar Peter

ISABELLA O, peace, the friar is come.

FRIAR PETER

Come, I have found you out a stand most fit,

Where you may have such vantage on the Duke

He shall not pass you. Twice have the trumpets

sounded.

The generous and gravest citizens

Have hent the gates, and very near upon

The Duke is entering. Therefore hence, away. Exeunt

(Act 4, Scene 4 and Scene 6)

Mark scheme

Show the mark scheme AQA mark scheme for Question 03 detailing indicative content across assessment objectives AO1 to AO5. AO5 covers critical interpretations regarding broken trust, male authority, and female cooperation. AO4 addresses connections across the literature of love. AO3 touches on historical contexts of honour, morality, and problem plays. AO2 covers dramatic form, soliloquy, verse versus prose, and imagery. AO1 evaluates essay structure and argument quality.

Question 03

03 Measure for Measure – William Shakespeare

‘In Measure for Measure, the trust between men and women is completely broken.’

In the light of this view, discuss how Shakespeare presents relationships between men

and women in this extract and elsewhere in the play.

[25 marks]

Possible content:

Please refer to pages 4 to 7.

AO5 Explore literary texts informed by different interpretations

Students might consider:

• scenes 4 and 6 separately or conflated together as one extract; students should not be penalised

for dealing with scenes unequally

• the view that trust between men and women has been broken in different relationships – between

siblings such as Claudio and Isabella; between lovers or potential lovers such as Angelo and

Mariana; between male leaders such as the Duke and Angelo and their female subjects, Isabella

for example

• Angelo’s belief that, despite his corruption, he remains untouchable and that the Duke is seeking to

protect him

• his belief that he had to renege on the promise to save Claudio in order to protect himself

• his awareness that he may be denied grace because of his guilt as sexual predator and unlawful

killer

• the fact that Angelo continues to neglect Mariana, his betrothed

• the view that the Duke’s disguise and deception as the Friar undermines trust between men and

women even while he contrives to do good

• the view that the Duke’s return and plans do not restore trust because he merely contrives a series

of marriages at the end

• the alternative view that the Duke, as the Friar, is working to right Angelo’s wrongs and will restore

faith in authority and justice

• the Duke’s reported pledge to Isabella that she will be protected in speaking out against Angelo

• the Duke’s reported hint to Isabella that he may have to appear to support Angelo initially but that

she will be saved

• the ways in which Friar Peter is presented as a supportive figure of trust in Scene 6

• the way in which the supportive co-operation and trust between Isabella and Mariana thrives

despite Angelo’s corrupt rule

• the view that the later revelation of the bed trick, reunion and a sanctioned marriage between

Angelo and Mariana after her return mends the damage done to trust

• these two scenes as part of a coherent narrative strand at this point in the play

• other scenes where Angelo’s destructive behaviour is presented

• the use of ‘trust’ and ‘completely broken’ in the given view

• the tragicomedy/problem play genre

• the possible impact of particular production(s) on the interpretation of the question

• the possible impact of recent debates about the exploitation of women and the controlling nature of

men

• etc.

AO4 Explore connections across literary texts

Focus might be on (in the literature of love):

• representations of: characters and events that break/restore trusting relationship between men and

women, particularly lovers; unmasking the truth about infidelity/abuse

• the tragicomedy/problem play genre

• etc.

AO3 Demonstrate understanding of the significance and influence of the contexts in which

literary texts are written and received

Focus might be on:

• how attitudes to the following might have changed over time: expectations about the honour and

morality of those in positions of responsibility; unmasking the truth about infidelity/abuse;

expectations of lovers and leaders as trustworthy

• the tragicomedy/problem play context

• etc.

AO2 Analyse ways in which meanings are shaped in literary texts

Focus might be on:

• the tragicomedy/problem play genre

• possible stage effects and interpretations

• structural issues relating to this stage of the plot: Angelo’s behaviour post-‘bed-trick’ and the

preparations for the Duke’s arrival bringing the play to a dramatic and morally restorative

conclusion

• the ways in which the prose at the beginning of Scene 4 and the verse of the rest of the extract

reflect the subject matter and attitude of the speakers, particularly: Angelo’s and Escalus’

complicity in preserving their corrupt and immoral power; the starkness of Angelo’s confessions in

his soliloquy; the ways in which Shakespeare presents the intertwined causes of Isabella and

Mariana; Friar Peter’s intervention to prepare for the Duke’s return

• the use of enjambement and caesurae in the verse sections of the extract to reflect the arguments

of the speakers

• the rhetorical devices used by Angelo in his soliloquy such as: abstract nouns; emotive/loaded

noun phrases; imagery of speech; the ways in which he confesses guilt and yet asserts his

arrogance that he is untouchable

• the rhetorical devices used by Friar Peter to stress the importance of the Duke’s return

• the use of short exchanges/sections/scenes/scenes-within-scenes to build narrative tension

• the various ways in which the syntax of statements, questions, exclamations and commands, along

with various forms of repetition, are used to underline thoughts, feelings and attitudes

• the roles of Escalus in Scene 4 and Friar Peter in Scene 6 to act as supporters to the adversaries

• irony and dramatic irony

• etc.

AO1 Articulate informed, personal and creative responses to literary texts, using associated

concepts and terminology, and coherent, accurate written expression

• quality of argument

• organisation of ideas

• use of appropriate concepts and terminology

• technical accuracy.

Accept any valid interpretations, any valid comments on contexts and any valid discussion of

authorial methods.

How to answer it

Measure for Measure: Gender, Deceit, and Broken Trust

EXAM SPECIFICATION FOCUS • 25 MARKS

What this question tests

  • AO1 (Argument & Expression): Formulating a conceptualised, critical argument evaluating whether gendered trust is irreparably broken or complicatedly renegotiated through patriarchal surveillance.
  • AO2 (Authorial Methods): Micro-analysis of dramatic verse vs. prose, soliloquies revealing psychic fragmentation, stichomythia, imagery of coercion, and staging tensions across Act IV Scenes 4 and 6.
  • AO3 (Contexts): Jacobean patriarchal authority, the sacred sanctity of marriage contracts (spousals de praesenti), female disenfranchisement under civic law, and conventions of the Shakespearean 'Problem Play'.
  • AO4 (Connections across Love Literature): Patterns of sexual hypocrisy, predatory coercion, fidelity under duress, and unmasking moral duplicity.
  • AO5 (Alternative Interpretations): Weighing pessimistic feminist readings (pervasive patriarchal violation) against comedic/providential readings (remedial female solidarity and the Duke's restorative justice).

1. Deconstructing the Prompt & Extract Strategy

Act IV Scene 4 (Angelo & Escalus; Angelo's Soliloquy) & Act IV Scene 6 (Isabella, Mariana, & Friar Peter)

🧠 Exam Technique: Interrogating the Prompt

The prompt makes an absolute claim: "the trust between men and women is completely broken."

  • Do not simply agree: Top-band candidates interrogate the absolute word "completely" .
  • Nuanced Thesis: While institutional and romantic trust is shattered by Angelo's predatory hypocrisy and the Duke's manipulative machinations, a covert moral trust emerges through female solidarity (Isabella and Mariana's pact) and Isabella's reliance on divine/spiritual authority.
  • Equal Treatment: Handle both scenes in the extract. Scene 4 exposes internal male moral ruin; Scene 6 stages women navigating deceptive masculine authority to reclaim agency.

💡 Key Knowledge: Structural Pivot Point

  • Act IV Scene 4: Post-'bed trick'. Angelo believes he has violated Isabella and reneged on his pact by ordering Claudio's death to protect his political reputation.
  • Act IV Scene 6: Isabella and Mariana prepare to execute the Duke's counter-plot at the city gates under Friar Peter's guidance.
  • Dramatic Contrast: Angelo experiences internal paralysis and terror of exposure, whereas the disenfranchised women forge a subversive alliance to compel public justice.

2. Micro-Analysis of the Extract (Act IV, Sc. 4 & 6)

Authorial Methods, Language, and Staging (AO2)

Act IV Scene 4: Angelo's Soliloquy

  • "This deed unshapes me quite, makes me unpregnant / And dull to all proceedings."
    Metaphor of pregnancy inverted: rather than fertility or life, sin renders him sterile, disoriented, and psychologically fragmented ( "unshapes" ).
  • "A deflowered maid, / And by an eminent body that enforced / The law against it!"
    Juxtaposition of predatory violence ( "deflowered" , "enforced" ) with civil sanctity ( "eminent body" ). He explicitly acknowledges his abuse of patriarchal office.
  • "For my authority bears so credent bulk / That no particular scandal once can touch"
    Hubristic reliance on institutional power to silence female testimony, echoing modern dynamics of systemic coercive control and victim intimidation.
  • "Alack, when once our grace we have forgot, / Nothing goes right. We would, and we would not."
    Antithetical couplet capturing psychological torment; his broken spiritual bond directly mirrors his shattered relational trust.

Act IV Scene 6: The Women's Subversive Alliance

  • "To speak so indirectly I am loath. / I would say the truth..."
    Isabella's moral agony: to dismantle corrupt male authority, she must participate in the Duke's theatrical deception, temporarily sacrificing her absolute commitment to transparent truth.
  • "'tis a physic / That's bitter to sweet end."
    Medicinal metaphor for the Duke's stratagem. Distrust of appearances is treated as an unpleasant necessity required to purge Viennese corruption.
  • "Be ruled by him."
    Mariana's deference highlights female vulnerability: even when challenging an abusive man (Angelo), women remain structurally dependent upon another male figure (the disguised Duke).
Examiner Insight (AO2): Notice the shift from the prose used by Escalus and Angelo at the start of Scene 4 (bureaucratic, guarded, civic deceit) to the intense, fractured blank verse of Angelo's soliloquy. Top answers link meter irregularities and caesurae directly to Angelo's collapsing moral equilibrium.

3. Wider Play Connections (AO1, AO3, AO4, AO5)

Tracking Gendered Trust Across Vienna

Angelo & Mariana: Betrothal & Exploitation

Context: Jacobean spousals de futuro/praesenti.

  • Angelo broke his formal betrothal when Mariana's dowry was lost at sea, inventing accusations against her honour to justify his greed.
  • The 'bed trick' restores legality but highlights the complete collapse of mutual emotional trust; physical consummation precedes emotional reconciliation.
  • In Act V, Mariana begs for Angelo's life, demonstrating unconditional fidelity that contrasts sharply with Angelo's transactional ruthlessness.

Claudio & Isabella: Sibling Betrayal

Key Scene: Act III Scene 1 (The Prison Scene).

  • Claudio shatters Isabella's familial trust by begging her to sacrifice her bodily chastity to save his life: "Sweet sister, let me live."
  • Isabella's furious recoil ( "O you beast! / O faithless coward, O dishonest wretch!" ) displays how self-preservation overrides fraternal loyalty under extremist laws.

The Duke & Isabella: Ambiguous Restorations

Key Scene: Act V Scene 1 (The Resolution).

  • The Duke manipulates Isabella by concealing Claudio's survival: "To make her heavenly comforts of despair." This constitutes an acute breach of emotional trust.
  • The final proposal: "Give me your hand and say you will be mine." Shakespeare gives Isabella no verbal response—staged either as willing complicity or stunned, alienated silence.

4. Step-by-Step Argument Architecture

Constructing a Band 5 / 25-Mark Essay

📐 4-Stage Comparative Paragraph Recipe

  1. Step 1: Conceptual Topic Sentence (AO1/AO4): Define a facet of gendered trust (e.g., systemic abuse of patriarchal office, commodification of female virtue, or deceptive solidarity).
  2. Step 2: Micro-Analysis of the Extract (AO2): Close reading of verse form, diction, or staging device in IV.4 or IV.6.
  3. Step 3: Wider Play Synthesis (AO1/AO2/AO3): Connect extract evidence to a corresponding moment (e.g., Claudio's cowardice in III.1 or the Duke's silent proposal in V.1), contextualising with Jacobean marital law or Puritan asceticism.
  4. Step 4: Evaluative Debate & Resolution (AO5): Balance whether trust is permanently broken or conditionally salvaged through Shakespeare's problem-play genre mechanics.

✅ Model Essay Thesis (Full Marks Perspective)

"While Shakespeare depicts institutional and sexual trust between men and women as deeply contaminated by masculine hypocrisy and coercive legal authority in Vienna, trust is not entirely broken. Rather, the play demonstrates that authentic trust is evacuated from romantic couplings and relocated into subversive female solidarity, even as the problematic comic resolution threatens to subsume female autonomy once more under the Duke's surveillance."

❌ Common Traps to Avoid (Examiner Feedback)

  • Treating the prompt as binary: Writing a list of broken promises without examining moments of reconciliation or female cooperation.
  • Ignoring Act IV Scene 6: Focusing entirely on Angelo's soliloquy and skipping the Isabella-Mariana-Friar Peter dynamic.
  • Character study without AO2: Treating Angelo and Isabella as real people rather than dramatic constructs governed by blank verse, soliloquy, and problem play tropes.
  • Uncritical acceptance of the Duke: Viewing the Duke as a purely benevolent 'deus ex machina' rather than an architect of deceit who manipulates female distress.

Topics

Love through the ages: Shakespeare · Measure for Measure

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