AQA A-Level English Literature A Paper 1: Love through the ages, June 2025: Question 4

25 marks · Hard difficulty · Extended Response

Discuss how Shakespeare presents thoughts and feelings about Leontes' past actions in the provided extract from Act 5, Scene 3 of The Winter's Tale and elsewhere in the play, in light of the view that the extent of his grief completely restores sympathy for him.

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Question 04 on William Shakespeare's The Winter's Tale asking candidates to discuss the view that 'The extent of Leontes' grief completely restores sympathy for him' in light of an extract from Act 5, Scene 3 and the play as a whole. The extract shows Leontes, Paulina, Polixenes, Perdita, and Camillo viewing the lifelike statue of Hermione, with Leontes reflecting on his shame, guilt, and sorrow.
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04 The Winter’s Tale – William Shakespeare

‘The extent of Leontes’ grief completely restores sympathy for him.’

In the light of this view, discuss how Shakespeare presents thoughts and feelings about

Leontes’ past actions in this extract and elsewhere in the play.

[25 marks]

LEONTES O Paulina,

We honour you with trouble. But we came

To see the statue of our queen: your gallery

Have we passed through, not without much content

In many singularities; but we saw not

That which my daughter came to look upon,

The statue of her mother.

PAULINA As she lived peerless,

So her dead likeness I do well believe

Excels whatever yet you looked upon,

Or hand of man hath done; therefore I keep it

Lonely, apart. But here it is: prepare

To see the life as lively mocked as ever

Still sleep mocked death. Behold, and say ’tis well!

Paulina draws a curtain and reveals Hermione, stand-

ing like a statue

I like your silence: it the more shows off

Your wonder. But yet speak: first you, my liege.

Comes it not something near?

LEONTES Her natural posture!

Chide me, dear stone, that I may say indeed

Thou art Hermione; or rather, thou art she

In thy not chiding, for she was as tender

As infancy and grace. But yet, Paulina,

Hermione was not so much wrinkled, nothing

So agèd as this seems.

POLIXENES O, not by much!

PAULINA

So much the more our carver’s excellence,

Which lets go by some sixteen years and makes her

As she lived now.

LEONTES As now she might have done,

So much to my good comfort as it is

Now piercing to my soul. O, thus she stood,

Even with such life of majesty – warm life,

As now it coldly stands – when first I wooed her!

I am ashamed. Does not the stone rebuke me

For being more stone than it? O royal piece!

There’s magic in thy majesty, which has

My evils conjured to remembrance, and

From thy admiring daughter took the spirits,

Standing like stone with thee.

PERDITA And give me leave,9

And do not say ’tis superstition, that

I kneel and then implore her blessing. Lady,

Dear queen, that ended when I but began,

Give me that hand of yours to kiss!

PAULINA O, patience!

The statue is but newly fixed, the colour’s

Not dry.

CAMILLO

My lord, your sorrow was too sore laid on,

Which sixteen winters cannot blow away,

So many summers dry. Scarce any joy

Did ever so long live; no sorrow

But killed itself much sooner.

POLIXENES Dear my brother,

Let him that was the cause of this have power

To take off so much grief from you as he

Will piece up in himself.

PAULINA Indeed, my lord,

If I had thought the sight of my poor image

Would thus have wrought you – for the stone is mine –

I’d not have showed it.

LEONTES Do not draw the curtain.

PAULINA

No longer shall you gaze on’t, lest your fancy

May think anon it moves.

LEONTES Let be, let be!

Would I were dead but that methinks already –

What was he that did make it? See, my lord:

Would you not deem it breathed, and that those veins

Did verily bear blood?

POLIXENES Masterly done!

The very life seems warm upon her lip.

LEONTES

The fixture of her eye has motion in’t

As we are mocked with art.

PAULINA I’ll draw the curtain.

My lord’s almost so far transported that

He’ll think anon it lives.

LEONTES O sweet Paulina,

Make me to think so twenty years together!

No settled senses of the world can match

The pleasure of that madness. Let’t alone.

(Act 5, Scene 3)

Mark scheme

Show the mark scheme Mark scheme for Question 04 on The Winter's Tale detailing assessment objectives AO1 through AO5. It provides points for consideration regarding Leontes' grief, remorse, and past actions, contrasting views on whether sympathy is restored, contextual factors relating to monarchs and marital jealousy, dramatic techniques of the statue scene, and structure across the play.

Question 04

04 The Winter’s Tale – William Shakespeare

‘The extent of Leontes’ grief completely restores sympathy for him.’

In the light of this view, discuss how Shakespeare presents thoughts and feelings about

Leontes’ past actions in this extract and elsewhere in the play.

[25 marks]

Possible content:

Please refer to pages 4 to 7.

AO5 Explore literary texts informed by different interpretations

Students might consider:

• the view that Leontes’ grief for his past actions concerning Hermione, other family members, close

friends and other courtiers along with Polixenes and his family completely restores sympathy for

him

• Leontes’ pain at how life-like the ‘statue’ is in capturing Hermione’s physical likeness but also

conveying Hermione’s best personal qualities

• the view that Leontes’ whole demeanour – the respectful way he addresses the statue and

Paulina, as well as references to his own guilt and regret – is an expression of grief

• his conciliatory and respectful attitude towards Paulina

• the references to Leontes’ silence and the emotions that he may be experiencing

• Leontes’ recognition of his own past actions and the necessity for him to be ‘chided’ and ‘rebuked’

• his reluctance for Paulina to draw the curtain and take away the ‘statue’ of Hermione

• the thoughts and feelings of the other characters

• the thoughts and feelings of audiences

• ‘extent’ could refer to the length of time he has endured grief rather than, or as well as, the depth of

grief presented

• the alternative view that it is rather Leontes’ understanding of his own guilt and the need for

penance that restores sympathy

• the view that audiences and/or other characters may not have had sympathy for Leontes in the first

place

• the view that the nature of his past actions cannot be completely forgiven or sympathy completely

restored

• his jealous rages earlier against Hermione and Polixenes, destroying Leontes’ bond with wife and

best friend

• his past actions earlier to precipitate the deaths of Mamillius and Antigonus, and the ‘death’ of

Hermione

• his earlier rejection of and threats toward Perdita as a baby

• his lack of repentance and regret in earlier scenes

• his dismissive attitude towards Paulina in earlier scenes

• the ways in which the presence of Perdita and Florizel might intensify Leontes’ grief

• the use of ‘extent’, ‘grief’, ‘completely’, ‘restores’ and ‘sympathy’ in the given view

• the tragicomedy/problem play/romance genre

• the possible impact of particular production(s) on the interpretation of the question

• the possible impact of recent debates about the exploitation of women and how their abusers

should be treated

• etc.

AO422 Explore connections across literary texts

Focus might be on (in the literature of love):

• representations of: grief; regret; memories of love; jealousy; suspicion; the effect of time on

thoughts and feelings about love

• the tragicomedy/problem play/romance genre

• etc.

AO3 Demonstrate understanding of the significance and influence of the contexts in which

literary texts are written and received

Focus might be on:

• how attitudes to the following might have changed over time: presentations of grief and sympathy

for those who express it; monarchs expressing personal emotions in public; the expectations of

husbands and wives within a marriage; infidelity in marriage; the expectations of royal marriages

• the tragicomedy/problem play/romance genre

• etc.

AO2 Analyse ways in which meanings are shaped in literary texts

Focus might be on:

• the tragicomedy/problem play/romance genre

• possible stage effects and interpretations

• the theatrical impact of: the revelation of the ‘statue’ and the build-up to the coup de théâtre of it

‘coming to life’; the reactions of Leontes and others; kneeling to the ‘statue’ and attempts to touch it

• structural issues relating to this stage of the plot: this final piece of the jigsaw left until the very end

• the ways in which the verse reflects the subject matter and attitude of the speakers, particularly:

the range of emotions expressed by Leontes in his grief; reactions of others on stage such as

Perdita; Paulina’s stage management of the statue’s revelation and her attempts to control the

actions and reactions of Leontes and others on stage

• the use of enjambement and caesurae to reflect the expression of the speakers’ thoughts and

feelings

• the use of shared lines and interruptions

• the various ways in which the syntax of statements, questions, exclamations and commands, along

with various forms of repetition, are used to underline thoughts, feelings and attitudes

• the echoes of stichomythia in the exchanges between Leontes and Paulina; the use of exclamation

and counter-exclamation

• the various rhetorical devices used by Paulina to build expectation about the ‘statue’ such as her

references to the artist’s skill and her commands about what they should do and what they should

refrain from doing

• the ways in which her commands give way to Leontes’ commands for her to leave the ‘statue’

visible

• Paulina’s quick thinking to explain Leontes’ comments about Hermione’s wrinkles

• the contrast between Paulina’s claims about the artist’s skills vs her reference to ‘my poor image’

• Leontes’ use of first-person plural to describe himself as king

• his use of apostrophe, questions, commands and exclamations to communicate his reactions to

the statue

• his (and Perdita’s) use of direct address to the ‘statue’

• his readiness to embrace metaphysical concepts such as ‘magic’ and ‘evil’ to explain his

experiences

• the use of stage silence to indicate awe

• Camillo’s role as chorus to stress the length and depth of Leontes’ grief 23

• irony and dramatic irony

• etc.

AO1 Articulate informed, personal and creative responses to literary texts, using associated

concepts and terminology, and coherent, accurate written expression

• quality of argument

• organisation of ideas

• use of appropriate concepts and terminology

• technical accuracy.

Accept any valid interpretations, any valid comments on contexts and any valid discussion of

authorial methods.

Section B: Unseen Poetry

How to answer it

AQA A-Level English Literature A: Leontes' Grief and Sympathy in The Winter's Tale

📋 Assessment Overview • 25 Marks

What this question tests:

  • AO1 (Argument & Expression): Structuring a cohesive, evaluative debate addressing the absolute claim: does grief "completely restore" sympathy?
  • AO2 (Dramatic Methods): Close textual analysis of verse form, shared lines, pauses, staging, stichomythia, sensory imagery, and the dramatic spectacle of the "statue".
  • AO3 (Context): Jacobean views on royal tyranny, penitence, divine providence, marriage dynamics, and late Romance genre conventions.
  • AO4 (Connections across Love Literature): Patterns of jealousy, destructive male anxiety, the passage of healing time, and redemption.
  • AO5 (Critical Interpretations): Weighing whether sixteen years of sorrow vindicate a tyrant whose cruelty caused irrecoverable losses (Mamillius, Antigonus).
Part 1: Question Deconstruction & Thesis Planning

Dissecting the Prompt: The Trap of "Completely"

Formulating a nuanced response to: "The extent of Leontes' grief completely restores sympathy for him."

🧠 Exam Technique: Interrogating Adverbs

Top-band responses (Level 5) target the absolute word "completely". Do not simply agree that Leontes is sad and therefore forgiven. Explore the tension between:

  • Duration & Depth: 16 years of self-imposed purgatory, humility, and submission to Paulina.
  • Irrevocable Tragedy: The death of innocent Mamillius cannot be undone by romance tropes.

📐 Essay Weighting: The 50/50 Balance

Allocate your analysis evenly between the extract and the wider play:

  1. 1 Extract (Act 5, Sc 3): Paulina's theatrical staging, Leontes' broken verse, somatic vulnerability, repentance.
  2. 2 Elsewhere (Acts 1–3): Sudden violent jealousy, blasphemy against Apollo's oracle, destruction of family.
  3. 3 Synthesis: The limits of comic reconciliation when shadowed by actual domestic and political tyranny.
Part 2: Extract Analysis (Act 5, Scene 3)

How Shakespeare Generates Sympathy in the Statue Scene

Close analysis of staging, verse, and dramatic tension

💡 Key Dramatic Methods in Extract

  • Apostrophe & Somatic Contrast: Leontes addresses the figure: "Chide me, dear stone" and identifies his own heart as harder than marble: "Does not the stone rebuke me / For being more stone than it?"
  • Shared Lines & Broken Meter: Short phrases ( "Let be, let be!" ) and caesurae demonstrate an overwhelmed psychological state contrasting his earlier rigid tyrannical decrees.
  • Relinquishing Patriarchal Authority: He willingly submits to Paulina's direction: "O sweet Paulina, / Make me to think so twenty years together!" , trading royal despotism for spiritual tutelage.

✅ Arguments For Restored Sympathy

Points rewarded by the mark scheme:

  • His grief is not performed vanity; sixteen years of mourning acknowledge his guilt.
  • Camillo confirms that Leontes' sorrow was "too sore laid on, / Which sixteen winters cannot blow away."
  • Leontes embraces the painful truth of aging: noting Hermione is "wrinkled" , proving he loves her mortal humanity, not an idealized fantasy.
Examiner Insight (AO2): Notice how Paulina orchestrates the visual tableau (coup de théâtre). The curtain functions as a moral barrier; Leontes begging "Do not draw the curtain" marks his desire to remain in contemplative repentance rather than fleeing into denial.
Part 3: Wider Play & Critical Perspectives (AO3 / AO5)

The Counter-Argument: Why Sympathy is Never "Complete"

Acts 1–3 Tyranny, Blasphemy, and Permanent Loss

❌ Common Errors & Pacing Traps

  • Ignoring Mamillius: Forgetting that Mamillius dies as a direct consequence of Leontes' tyrannical rage (Act 3, Sc 2). Romance reconciles lovers, but cannot resurrect dead children.
  • Treating jealousy as reasonable: Unlike Othello, who is manipulated by Iago, Leontes experiences self-generated delusion (an infection of the brain).
  • Passive reading of Paulina: Viewing Paulina merely as a scold, rather than the moral conscience holding divine authority over the King.

💡 Contextual & Genre Nuance (AO3/AO4)

  • The Romance / Tragicomedy Genre: Blends catastrophic tragedy in Sicilia with pastoral renewal in Bohemia, concluding in wonder (admiratio). Yet the emotional scars challenge total closure.
  • Jacobean Kingship: James I emphasized the divine right and balance of kings; Leontes committed blasphemy by declaring "There is no truth at all i' the oracle!" (Act 3, Sc 2). Complete sympathy is problematic when holy order is violated.
  • Modern/Feminist Perspectives: Audiences remain wary of Leontes' commodification of women; his tyrannical order to burn Perdita as a bastard ( "Commit them to the fire" ) leaves lingering revulsion.
Part 4: Band 5 Comparative Synthesis

Crafting a Top-Level Evaluative Conclusion

Balancing tragic damage against comedic renewal

🧠 Essay Structure Template

  • Introduction: Define grief in the play (penance vs. mere sadness). State thesis: Shakespeare secures substantial pity through Leontes' genuine abjection, but deliberately denies complete absolution due to the permanent casualties of his madness.
  • Paragraph 1 (Extract): The visual & linguistic humbleness of the statue scene. Contrast of "cold stone" with Leontes' warm, repentant tears.
  • Paragraph 2 (Wider Play - Acts 1-2): The monstrous irrationality of his initial jealousy. Contrast the tender husband in Act 5 with the paranoid tyrant who tore his family apart.
  • Paragraph 3 (Extract & Wider - Staging Paulina): The role of Paulina as surrogate priest/confessor. The transfer of power from monarch to female moral arbiter.
  • Paragraph 4 (The Unredeemed Tragedy): Mamillius and Antigonus. The bittersweet nature of Late Romance.
  • Conclusion: Shakespeare delivers emotional catharsis and wonder rather than seamless moral exoneration.

✅ Examiner Key Phrases to Adopt

  • "psychological hubris gives way to somatic humility"
  • "the shadow of Mamillius' demise qualifies pastoral renewal"
  • "dramatic stichomythia underscores Leontes' emotional vulnerability"
  • "the coup de théâtre demands faith over legalistic justice"
Final Examiner Verdict: Responses scoring 21–25 marks consistently link the micro-details of the extract (e.g. Leontes marveling at the wrinkles on Hermione's face) to macro-concerns of the play: the corrosive nature of jealousy, the curative power of time, and the poignant, incomplete nature of human forgiveness.

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Love through the ages: Shakespeare · The Winter's Tale

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